this was my first translation. the original line is my own.
each following couplet features the same letters in count as the italicized line. the final couplet was further broken - just cause - poetic effect.
and then great flashes of air
and then great
flashes of air
near flagrant
head of thesis
farside gathers
half one tan
aft handle her
a reason
a gift
Wednesday, April 23, 2008
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